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Joe Smith
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Posted: 09 May 2024 at 6:59pm | IP Logged | 1 post reply

Hi JB-Effers,

I have finally given in and started writing. My worst fears are coming true
about the project, though, as I can’t, and don’t want to, stop writing. I’m
gathering chapter after chapter and having so much fun doing it.

I feel the weight of unedited oversight upon me.

So, as I am a complete novice in the field:

Should I hire an editor immediately?

There is always self-doubt when doing a creative project, but I have to say
there’s no way I’m going to stop this no matter how bad I may be at writing.
I think I would like somebody to tell me where the plot holes are, direct me
in a way that makes dialogue easier to read. I don’t want to do that myself.
The story is unfolding and I am along for the ride. It’s writing itself at this
point.

I appreciate any advice you might have whether you are experienced or not.
Thank you,

Joemith(Realname).
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I would just get the whole thing down while the creative juices are flowing. Don't worry about all the rest until you get to the second draft stage.
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Posted: 09 May 2024 at 7:12pm | IP Logged | 3 post reply

Joemith?
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Posted: 09 May 2024 at 7:21pm | IP Logged | 4 post reply

I think my need for an editor is quite evident. 😬
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Posted: 09 May 2024 at 7:24pm | IP Logged | 5 post reply

Thanks Peter. I mean, that’s what’s going to happen anyway at the current
rate. It’s scary to do all these dialogue bits and just blow by them thinking
I’m breaking cardinal rules.
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Posted: 09 May 2024 at 7:51pm | IP Logged | 6 post reply

If you haven't read Stephen King's On Writing, he's got some great practical advice in general, but his advice on this topic is to write the first draft "with the door closed" and the second draft "with it open". Don't show anyone the dang thing until you've completed a draft, and then find a trusted reader to poke it for you.
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Posted: 09 May 2024 at 8:00pm | IP Logged | 7 post reply

Just go for it.

I wrote my first book around twelve years ago, self-published without using an editor. It was reasonably well received, although I felt the need to rewrite it a few years later.

There are a huge amount of unedited writers out there. If you are writing for your own pleasure and are not too worried about making money, it can be an enjoyable pastime. 

Why not do your best work, have it printed and then give it to friends and relatives for their honest opinion? 
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Thanks Dave K. Googling that book now.

To be transparent, I would love for this to be a comic book. That’s why I’m
thinking editor right out of the box. (And by right out of the box, I’m talking
Book 7 Chapter 6 as of today. Started on 2/28/24)
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I've edited text semi-professionally, even received a couple 'thanks' in books that went on to see publication. I always had a Strunk & White's 'The Elements Of Style' at my side but I was poorest at editing my own work I think; it's hard to be objective enough. I agree Stephen King's book is an excellent one, and Dean Koontz wrote a good one as well which I've also read.

Editing/writing for comics would be something else entirely though, perhaps more in line with film direction versus plain text fiction. For comics I've read Will Eisner's Comics And Sequential Art and Scott McCloud's Understanding Comics and they had a lot of food for thought in them.
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Here’s something:

should I give away the story to the beta reader /editor BEFORE they start
reading it. Like a writer/director trying to pitch a movie? Should they know
where we are eventually headed? Or, should I trust I have the good twist
and ask them for clarity problems and plot holes. My intention is not to
dominate the world of writing, but to make a story that has a journey worth
taking.

And spell my own name correctly.
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On Writing is useful, though King has some idiosyncrasies that I disagree with (he never uses apostrophes when dropping a letter in someone's dialogue, for example).

There's a lot of great advice in the book overall. The first time I read it, I found the advice to avoid all adverbs a little jarring, but have since come to see the wisdom in it.
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Eek. I’m sure I’ve loaded the truck up with adverbs. Gonna need a bigger
truck.
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