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Mark Haslett Byrne Robotics Member
Joined: 19 April 2004 Location: United States Posts: 6515
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Posted: 09 September 2022 at 10:12pm | IP Logged | 1
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Excellent Mark. Love your background inks.
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Paul Wills Byrne Robotics Member
Joined: 18 August 2018 Location: United States Posts: 901
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Posted: 12 September 2022 at 3:42pm | IP Logged | 2
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Another page I went back and worked on. I had to fix a few things that bugged me the first time. Sometimes I wonder if I'm the only one who can see the differences but at least it puts my mind at ease!
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Steven Queen Byrne Robotics Member
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Posted: 14 September 2022 at 1:07am | IP Logged | 3
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Very nice Paul. You make me wish I were a better inker!
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Paul Wills Byrne Robotics Member
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Posted: 21 September 2022 at 3:18pm | IP Logged | 4
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Another one I decided to go back, clean up and make changes. I sure get a kick out of Byrne's sci-fi characters. Seems so effortless
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John Byrne
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Joined: 11 May 2005 Posts: 133579
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Posted: 21 September 2022 at 4:33pm | IP Logged | 5
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Drifting thru to add a small note of caution. Some of you, inking the Thing, are rounding off his skin plates, bringing in a cobblestone effect. Many inkers do this, but the look I go for is the sharp edges of a dry riverbed.
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Paul Wills Byrne Robotics Member
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Posted: 21 September 2022 at 11:35pm | IP Logged | 6
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...taking JB's priceless tips to heart and re-visiting one of my Thing pages.(great way to reference description so I can grasp the idea!). I tried to sharpen and flatten those plates as much as I could but still a little cobblestone-y. If I were to start from scratch, I think I could implement the technique a bit better. I might have to try again on a new page. I did get a chance to revise some other things though. for me, one of the best ways to learn to improve is revisiting previous work with fresh eyes to see what i could have been done better.
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Paul Wills Byrne Robotics Member
Joined: 18 August 2018 Location: United States Posts: 901
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Posted: 03 October 2022 at 12:02pm | IP Logged | 7
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A great Wolverine intrigue page with lots of different textures - a great way for an inker to learn his craft!I think I'm finally getting some of the subtle nuances of inking (after more studying of the greats). Also, whoever claims John Byrne doesn't draw backgrounds - let alone highly detailed backgrounds - is out of their F'n mind!
Edited by Paul Wills on 03 October 2022 at 7:42pm
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Steven Queen Byrne Robotics Member
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Posted: 03 October 2022 at 6:20pm | IP Logged | 8
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Outstanding Paul! I love Logan's entrance into the lab in particular.
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Paul Wills Byrne Robotics Member
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Posted: 03 October 2022 at 7:45pm | IP Logged | 9
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Thank you Steven!I had to go back and make some corrections on Doom's capes. One of the things I struggled with on this page initially. Funny - seeing the page reduced down to size shows you what didn't quite work. I'm sure in a day or two I will see more!
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Steven Queen Byrne Robotics Member
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Posted: 04 October 2022 at 3:12pm | IP Logged | 10
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If I may be so bold as to offer some commiseration on drawing cloth:
1) I try to remember most folds are soft edges. 2) If there's decent ambient light, the fold-valleys should be in half-tones, not full shadow. 3) Unless there's wind or motion, soft cloth "hangs" with gravity from a point straight above.
One artist who used to make a living drawing mythical Mediterranean people in togas was Sir Lawrence Alma-Tadema. You might enjoy looking at his work. The brightness of his style compliments Mr. Byrne's to my eye.
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Paul Wills Byrne Robotics Member
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Posted: 04 October 2022 at 4:28pm | IP Logged | 11
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Thanks Steven for the great tips! I will check out Sir Lawrence Alma-Tadema as well. It's nice to have a proper reference for practicing!
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Paul Wills Byrne Robotics Member
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Posted: 04 October 2022 at 10:59pm | IP Logged | 12
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Ok, I'm taking another stab at that last panel. Maybe I'm overthinking it!
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