Posted: 27 July 2005 at 4:34am | IP Logged | 4
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Daniel---Nice Dr Doom, like the colouring. You chose a difficult angle but pulled it off really well, my only point would be that choosing the ventral aspect, as you have, the tops of his legs [From his knee joint to the Greater Trochanter] look a little skinny. Dr.Doom exudes power from the great pose you have given him, but he lacks something in his stature. One of the many things I picked up from Alan Davis was a love of exagerating the figure. Play around with odd looking people. draw them all in proportion except say their calves or their shoulders. Makes for some fun, trust me!
Bill---That sucks that they pulled it but then, I guess -that- is the way the industry works. At least you've reacted professionally, saying you can provide them with alternatives! I have to say there -was- something unsettling about the kid though...I think it might have been accentuated by the transparent outline. In doing so you gave him an etheral feel which may have conrtibuted to the "demonic" feel. Personally It looked more "stylistic" than "scary" to me.
Mark---Excellent to see your stuff again. post more! More practice equals better skills. David Lloyd does some nice Contrast work between light and dark. I'd be interested in hearing whether you are intentionally avoiding hatching or weather your not using hatching is a confidence thing. [Hatching being solid black lines crossing over each other to provide a "gray" tapering effect from black to white] If it's just a confidence thing I'd reccomend looking at Neal Adams and Kevin Nowlans work to give you some good examples of how they transfer from solid black to white.
Ed---As much as I like the artwork, I'm not sure about the "embossed" look the colours have provided...maybe it's just because it's so unusual to me. Looking at the B&W in my head the Thing is really good....I think it's me! I'm just freaked out that they are coming out of the screen-LOL
Mikael---Wow, you have a talented family huh!? Pass my compliments on to your brother and sister...save some for yourself too;-)
Steve---Great page dude.
Felipe---More great sketches. Really impressive.
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