Posted: 21 July 2005 at 8:56am | IP Logged | 7
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Sorry for absence...will try and comment on everything I have missed to date...here goes and don't say I'm not dedicated to you guys...
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[ Gerry Turnbull ]...with alittle nudging from james,pencilled and inked by my mate Billy,tones and colours me. |
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Really nice work there, on everyone involved's part Gerry. Thank goodness you have people like James to push you to share such great pieces.
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[ Flavio Sapha ][The Hustler] |
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Great composition Flavio. Love the mood. In actual fact I prefer the first one, rather than the second, ammunded version.
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[ Gerry Turnbull ][Dr Strange & Neal Adams piece] |
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Both came out really well. But the Dr Strange piece serves to highlight the area's you are holding back in pal. Try not to hide from committing yourself to your light source in your inking. Instead of leaving it for the colourist on the cape, you could have accentuated the drop shadow from Dr Strange onto the cloak. The flamboyance you used in the grass on the Neal Adams piece is a good example of taking an idea, good-or-bad and running with it. Exercise this trait a little more, I guarantee you'll accelerate you learning process many-fold. This is meant as friendly pointers -NOT- criticism.
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[ James Stewart ]...heres the pencils for a Dr Doom pinup.still to ink it. |
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Excellent piece James. What I like about this is the efforts taken to underline the "character" you are dealing with, from the setting to the portraits on the wall. Try taking -that- excellent trait and turning it up a notch to the characters stances and poses. Take your mirror and stand in front of it, as you might imagine Doom to do himself. Remember, in your minds eye, the key parts of the posture that stood out for you and bring those into your drawings. I -really- believe that would push your already great work that little bit further. Oh as for the inking, you are taking on a new tool as far as I recall reading, the brush pen!yeah? Try not marrying one implement. As solid a job you've turned in here buddy, I think you've got a lot of "samey" lines. By that I'm talking specifically about line weights. When I first took on the brush all I could do was thin lines. However it's a bit of sound advice from me to tell you to use the brush for the line thickness you feel you are comfortably producing and swap to another implement for those other line weights...just until the skill meets the demand. It'll serve the great artwork better...trust me;-)
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[ Justin Wasson ]...Matt, here's your Grifter image. |
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Whoo-ee, Justin that's a doosey! Great attitude and "character, James "This" is what I was talking about. Justin has hit a great commanding pose that suits Grifter here. Before we let Justins head get too big he has put both Grifters feet on alternate planes of perspective but then it's JFF this piece right! Not going to dwell too long on that because I'm a great admirer of Justins.
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[ Anthony castrillo ][Solar coloured commission] |
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A great piece dude...I have to admit to being somewhat distracted by the big Solar head in the top right side. I guess it steals my focus from the centre-piece full figure, simply because you haven't drained any of the colour from the image. I suspected when I was viewing the B&W that the head shot was like a collage or secondary image and that the main thrust was the full figure in the centre. As such I guessed that the head shot would be somewhat more transparent or etheral. Only a colouring point though;-)
Quote] [ Anthony castrillo ]Darren, thanks for the ALIEN ref, it will come in handy. [/Quote]
My pleasure dude....I knew it was lying around somewhere.
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[ Marc Baptiste ] wanna see some drawings of some built/buffed/hot/sexy men! |
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Marc...sheesh come out the closet dude, why dontcha! ;-) Anthony's just posted a great Solar image, that -has- to quentch your manly thirst, no?
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[ Chris Malgrain ]Common Grounds illo |
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Another fine example of why Chris is just so god-damned good. Great composition and movement. My only detracting thought on this whole illo was the size of their feet, one and all! Being unfamiliar wiith the characters, I'm just assuming that this is some character traits.
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