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Peter Martin
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I had to go and ink this.... just too cool of a piece!




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Nice wok, Joel!
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Edit: Trying out a link to my hi-res version:
https://photos.app.goo.gl/79256pswNCms9RXs5



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Great Work Mark! I'm still struggling with page right-side on that one.
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Thanks! Yeah, this is a trick one. Seeing it reduced always makes me want to change things. I think I could have used a lighter line on the buildings further back.
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Your Thing is a thing of beauty.
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Mark, I’m curious about the choice to make the sky black. What
motivated that decision?
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Peter Martin
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They sky is an interesting one. Looking at the pages in pencil, I saw it all as daylight -- but going back and reading the story again, it does say it's twilight as they are approaching Manhattan.

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Peter, that isn’t lost on me. I always envisioned it as a coloriing effect
since solid black is a harsh way to represent “twilight”.
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Eric,

I knew that the scene was night time, so decided to go full in on it from an inking perspective. I did it as layer in ProCreate after inking the page as presented, and liked it much more. It definitely could be done with a coloring effect as well.

I do like how it makes Cyclops "pop" more. This can debated, but from a design perspective I think it pulls the eye through the scene more as well, creating somewhat of a triangle from Cyclops, to the sky, to the shadows under the car near Colussus.

From a "would JB like this?" perspective, I was more worried about the liberties I took putting the lines into the Human Torch.
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Well done Mark.
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