Mark, I like the "smoke" effect you have with the digital inks. The white over the black has an interesting looks, but gets close to looking like Wolverine is being attacked by Venom. Did you do page one of issue three? I wonder what that splash would look like if you approached the evil Storm the same way. Also, since you are working digitally, you might be zooming in too close for some of your line work. That tear in Wolverine's mask on panel 4 is so finely detailed that it would never make it to the printed page, but I guess that brings up the point that we aren't really doing these pages for publication. I'm still amazed by what is achievable digitally. Try getting even thinner with your speed lines to help separate them from figures and other lines.

Paul, your page looks dark, but that might just be the scan. Your backgrounds are getting very good. The figure work is solid as well. I wonder if you can find even thinner line weights. Are you adding your white digitally? The highlights on some of your metal surfaces are so perfect.

Here is my latest page. I think I need to do a pass with white ink to make a few more elements separated.

Much appreciate the compliments, Eric, I use a fine point white-out pen for the line highlights. With your page- I can also see the more you ink, the better it gets! The last panel reminds me a bit of Art Adams inks.

So far, I have done all of this with the technical pen brush in procreate, under the inking tools. If anyone has used Procreate and has a different brush to use, let me know.