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James Stewart
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 7:40am | IP Logged | 1  

How are people handeling continuity? I mean if I drew my pages now and someone drew pages preceding mine that had a tear in her costume or the Terrorists looking different in someway?

Darren maybe if we all post our pencils first we can make any changes when we see it as a whole,that way we can even have a go at inking a page each of others inks if anyone is up for it.i,m trying to get as much reference as possible just now,cops,central park,what Sue is wearing,etc and  Ron has sent some to my e-mail adress.i won't be able to to start pencilling this till the end of next month.so i'm looking forward to seeing any finished penciled pages.or refrence being posted.doing a few breakdowns just now, and haveing a hoot.this is a rough layout for the last panel.i like a black ring with the 4 in it but nothings set in stone yet.

 

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Darren Taylor
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 7:57am | IP Logged | 2  

Here are my thumbs for pg22. So you can see what I'm thinking for the action. I'll use the panel base as the ground....seems like a naturally 'obvious' storytelling aid.

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Darren Taylor
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 8:06am | IP Logged | 3  

The panel looks great dude...if you could stand a "suggestion" given it's not written in stone. How about pushing one of her legs back...just to vary her position within the perspective?

 

Like so!

-Darren

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James Stewart
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 8:41am | IP Logged | 4  

 Cheers Darren i will give that a go when i get the pencilled page done..i'm new to all this perspective stuff. BTW your layouts look great.Nice to be doing this project and hopefully learn a few things in the process.
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Darren Taylor
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 8:43am | IP Logged | 5  

 James Stewart wrote:
 Nice to be doing this project and hopefully learn a few things in the process.

 

Ditto.

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Jacob P Secrest
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 10:39am | IP Logged | 6  

Double ditto, I'll have mine posted as soon as possible, which could very
possibly be later today.
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Darren Taylor
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 11:43am | IP Logged | 7  

Page 21 Panel 3 (no backgrounds...I'll leave these until I see what precedes my pages)

-Darren

 

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Justin Wasson
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I'll wait to see Jacob's page 15 before I thumbnail my pages. 

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F. Ron Miller
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 12:52pm | IP Logged | 9  

Welcome aboard Darren! This book is filling up fast.


PAGES: (UPDATED)
1,2,3 - Stephen Rockwood
4,5 - Veli Loponen
6,7 - Orlando Teuta
8, 9,10 - F. Ron Miller
11, 12, 13 - James Stewart
14,15 - Jacob Secrest
16,17,18 - Justin Wasson
19 - Steve Gumm
20,21,22 - Darren Taylor
23 - Gordon Somers


REFERENCE MATERIAL:

"The Castle" in Central Park:
http://images.google.com/images?q=castle+%2B+%22central+park %22&ie=ISO-8859-1&hl=en&btnG=Google+Search

New York City Cops:
http://images.google.com/images?q=NYPD&btnG=Search&hl=en&lr= &ie=ISO-8859-1

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Darren Taylor
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 F. Ron Miller wrote:
Welcome aboard Darren! This book is filling up fast.
There's still two pages open. Any other takers out
there?

Thanks dude, my pleasure. I'm trying to get Gordon to sign up for a page...he's pretty busy at the moment but who knows!?

Ya oot there reeding dis bro?

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Stephen Rockwood
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Posted: 26 February 2005 at 1:32pm | IP Logged | 11  

This is what I'd like to dress Sue on Page 3.  Any objections or other ideas?


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Darren Taylor
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 Stephen Rockwood wrote:
This is what I'd like to dress Sue on Page 3.  Any objections or other ideas?

Looks good Stephen, I think making them "hipster" type jeans is a nice modern turn. You might also want a "belt" on there too...something 'trendy' to help "accessorise".

-Darren

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