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Justin Wasson
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Steve: GREAT job!!!!!
Darren: also GREAT job!!!!
I'm feeling very Tony the Tiger right now I guess
Justin Wasson
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Stephen Rockwood
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| Posted: 03 March 2005 at 9:28pm | IP Logged | 2
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Nice page Steve. Are you influenced by Ron Lim at all?
Maybe it is the inking but this page reminds me quite of bit of his
art. I like it. :)
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Steve Gumm
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Thanks for all the kind words. I've had a real good time working on the page.
Darren, If I could get that darn pen to bend to my will you'd see a lot more areas that look like Austin. He and Sinnot are my favorite inkers. I wouldn’t mind your linework dropping out of the pen either. I think your line weight and hatching are excellent.
Stephen, Haven't studied Lim much but I find myself trying to beat down the Byrne influence in my work. You don't see it much here, it's tends to be more apparent when I draw male superheroes. There can be only one John Byrne so, like most artists, I’m always trying to find my own voice.
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Darren Taylor
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Justin Wasson wrote:
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Steve: GREAT job!!!!!
Darren: also GREAT job!!!!
I'm feeling very Tony the Tiger right now I guess
Justin Wasson
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Thanks Justin.
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Orlando Teuta Jr
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Here's my new page 6:
I should have Page 7 uploaded before Monday.
Here's the version suggested by Justin. Good call and thanks.
Edited by Orlando Teuta Jr on 05 March 2005 at 12:06pm
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Steve Gumm
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Orlando, It is more dramatic. The smoke helps
convey a sense of urgency. I like your perspective
work. Good job. Looking forward to seeing your next
page.
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Darren Taylor
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Orlando Teuta Jr wrote:
Here's my new page 6:
I should have Page 7 uploaded before Monday.
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Orlando...I know this is just my opinion but that page is leaps and bounds better than the last for dramatic emphisis.
Great stuff!
-Darren.
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Justin Wasson
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I agree, Very nice work.
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Orlando Teuta Jr
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Cool. Now I can say my old stuff is not better. Thanks for the kind words guys.
Edited for spelling.
Edited by Orlando Teuta Jr on 04 March 2005 at 6:58pm
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Justin Wasson
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Orlando
If I may make a suggestion, and this could be fixed in Photoshop.
In your second to last panel you have Sue jumping towards the left. If you flip it in Photoshop then Sue will be taking the viewers "eye" into the next panel, not away from it.
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Stephen Rockwood
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Here's page 3...now I start on page 2
If any of you inkers want a larger copy to ink just let me know.
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Orlando Teuta Jr
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I took Justin's good advice and flipped the panel. I didn't want
to add another image, so I posted it in the original message.
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