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Anthony J Lombardi
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| Posted: 10 September 2005 at 5:10pm | IP Logged | 1
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Good to see you back again Marc. It's a nice drawing of Wonder Woman .It reminds me more of how she looked when she was first designed then how she is drawn now.
I know you had said you wanted to be critiqued before so i will do so now...
You have a nice layout for your design but something you should look out for Her back leg doesn't quite look right. I think thats because of your line work on the thigh it looks much shorter then i think it should be so keep your foreshortening in mind .Other then that good way to make a come back to posting art again.
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Vladimir Fiks
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| Posted: 10 September 2005 at 5:58pm | IP Logged | 2
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Good to have you back Marc. I really like this piece, the WW looks like the
Golden Age version, which is cool. The way her body is twisted, her right
arm just doesn't look quite right, something about the way it connects at
the shoulder. Still a strong piece.
Vlad
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Guest79877180
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| Posted: 10 September 2005 at 9:57pm | IP Logged | 3
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Marc - I'll agree with what has been said about the piece by Anthony
and Vlad. I'll throw in that I like the quality of your line work.
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Charles Jensen
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 2:11am | IP Logged | 4
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Marc Babtiste, great job. Your pencil lines are so clean and tidy. I really like the lines on the face but it looks really good all around. I think the pose is very unique, and I like that, but I also find the pose kind of awkward at the same time. I think it might be a little better if you could see the back leg a little more make it more clear.. but if it was colored it might take care of that issue.
I like your work Marc, I am curious to see you draw things other than WW as well. :)
I did a little piece for a photoshop coloring tutorial... I call this piece "Old School". No critiques please! I am well aware of this piece's flaws! :D
Edited by Charles Jensen on 11 September 2005 at 2:16am
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Justin Wasson
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 3:41am | IP Logged | 5
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I have no complaints since I'm such a HUGE Firestorm fan.
Justin Wasson
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James Stewart
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 4:15am | IP Logged | 6
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I like it Charles nice style your useing.keep em comin bud.
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Charles Jensen
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 4:51am | IP Logged | 7
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Thanks guys. :) I am trying to get back into drawing again. I hadn't picked up a pencil for a long time but all the artistic juices flowing here at the JBF, from guys like yourself, has got me going again. It is painful though.. I lost the miniscule abilty I had... I didn't think it was possible to have less ability. haha So anyway, bear with me.. there might be some more stinkers coming.
Justin Wasson said:I have no complaints since I'm such a HUGE Firestorm fan.
Awsome! I was trying to do a Kirbyesque Firestorm. I hadn't ever seen anything like that. haha A friend of mine always makes fun of me for liking Firestorm.. questions my masculinty. LOL Part of the reason why I got a kick out of drawing him.
How does JB feel about Firestorm, any idea? I have been out of comics for a while. I recently read through a bio and learned Firestorm has been through some rough times since I last saw him -- some strange changes. It would be cool if JB revamped Firestorm like he did Superman. I think mid eighties Firestorm had a cool dynamic that reminds me of the FF dynamic. I wonder if he could solve some of Firestorm's problems and maybe create a cool rogue's gallery for him. It would be a challenge, that's for sure!
Edited by Charles Jensen on 11 September 2005 at 5:05am
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Anthony J Lombardi
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 6:37am | IP Logged | 8
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Charles, Your art is very Kirbyish. It looks more the way his style is interpeted for the Justice League then how kirby did in comics nicely done. I'd like to see you handle of some Kirby's Fourth World characters.
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 7:45am | IP Logged | 9
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Charles - pretty cool looking piece. I'd argue that it even has a
bit of a new style feel in the vein of the animated JLA or the original
Batman animated series.
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Ethan Van Sciver
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 1:59pm | IP Logged | 10
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Charles:
A+ on the Firestorm piece.
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Anthony J Lombardi
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 2:15pm | IP Logged | 11
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this isn't done yet but i wanted to scan it and see how it looks on screen so i just hought i'd share with you guys
feel free to comment if you guys want.
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| Posted: 11 September 2005 at 2:31pm | IP Logged | 12
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AJL - looking great so far.
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