"Original pencils and inks by the lovely and talented Anthony Lombardi and colors by me:"-Matt

C&C!? You are a brave man!

First impressions, I like it first and foremost.

Second I'd pick you up on the flames. I like the smoke but the flames just don't do it for me, maybe had they been on the end of a match I might have bought it but nope, they don't work. Take a good look and some pictures of Jets with their afterburners on...now there's some power;-)

Third I'd say, you need to ad some shadows to help make the character "pop" simply put, he's in broad daylight the shadows would be in high contrast, however much or little would be in view.

That's it!

But don't lose sight of my first impression!

Good job Matt.

Well now i'm taking a look at it for a second time now Matthew. so i can say some new things. I agree with Darren about the flames , The face plate i would have done it looking like a a mirror just to contrast with the yellow and red's and to pick up the colors of the blue sky. Other then that......

Matthew i know i designed it but , your coloring is making me see so many things that it didn't really notice all that much when i drew it so many things are standing out awesome. :) You actually made the design look much cooler than i had designed 2 thumbs up on the craftsmanship

Matthew's right i never added any shadows to the sketch. I couldn't decide how i wanted them to be.

Matt do you have this on a psd file with the layers intact?

If soreduce the image so it's no wider than 900pixels and email it to me please and I'll do a quick rough and ready example of what I was talking about.

Regards,

Darren

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