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Hunter McFalls
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Steve Horton
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| Posted: 01 March 2007 at 11:25am | IP Logged | 2
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CONCEPT BY BILL WIIST
PLOT BY STEVE HORTON
PENCILS BY BILL WIIST
DIALOGUE BY STEVE HORTON
PAGE 1
Panel 1
REED: WE MAY STILL DIE.
REED: TIME TRAVEL HAS A WAY OF DOING...
REED: UPREDICTABLE THINGS TO THE TIMELINE.
SFX: CLIK!
Panel 2
REED: HOWEVER, WE STILL HAVE TO TRY... FOR THE GOOD OF HUMANITY --
SFX: HMMMMMMMM
Panel 3
BEN: I HEAR YA, STRETCHO. JUST LEMME PUT OUT THIS CEEGAR...
SFX: FSHHT!
SFX: HMMMMMMMM
Panel 4
REED: NEXT STOP: THE CRASH SITE!
BEN: BACK WHEN I WAS EVEN UGLIER THAN I AM NOW!
SUE: STAY SHARP, EVERYONE.
JOHNNY: UGH - TIME TRAVEL MAKES ME SICK TO MY STOMACH --
SFX: HMMMMMMMM
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Steve Horton
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PANEL 1
JOHNNY: THERE'S THE ROCKET! WOW, IT JUST CRASHED!
REED: SUE, PLEASE GIVE US A BETTER VIEW.
PANEL 2
SUE: WE'VE ALREADY MANIFESTED OUR POWERS -- JOHNNY'S FLAMING ON --
PANEL 3
JOHNNY: NUTS TO THIS! SUE, YOU JUST SAID THE MAGIC WORDS!
JOHNNY: I'M GONNA GO TALK TO THEM - TELL THEM ABOUT THE VACCINE!
PANEL 4
REED: JOHNNY! STOP!
BEN: THAT TWO BIT MATCHSTICK! HE'LL WRECK EVERYTHING!
Edited by Steve Horton on 01 March 2007 at 11:40am
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Steve Horton
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PANEL 1
BEN: MY YOUNGER SELF'S NOT AS REASONABLE AS ME --
BEN: HIS EYES AIN'T AS BLUE NEITHER --
BEN: WHEN HE SEES JOHNNY...
PANEL 2
REED: LISTEN TO ME - ALL OF YOU! THAT MEANS YOU TOO, BEN!
TOGETHER WE HAVE MORE POWER THAN ANY OF US HAVE EVER POSSESSED!
BEN: WE GOTTA USE THAT POWER TO -- HEY, WHAT'S THAT?
PANEL 3
JOHNNY: HI, YOUNGER SELVES! IT'S ME - JOHNNY!
JOHNNY: WE'RE GONNA STICK YOU ALL FULL OF NEEDLES TO SAVE OUR LIVES!
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Steve Horton
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PANEL 1
REED: GOOD LORD! ANOTHER JOHNNY!
REED: IT COULD BE ANOTHER ALIEN - LIKE GORMUU!
REED: PERHAPS A SHAPESHIFTER THAT CAN MIMIC OUR POWERS!
BEN: WHATEVER IT IS, IT JUST BARKED UP THE WRONG TREE!
SUE: STOP! ALL OF YOU, CALM DOWN FOR A SECOND!
YOUNG JOHNNY: HE LOOKS JUST LIKE ME...
OLD JOHNNY: HEY, WAITASEC! I'M JUST TRYING TO HELP!
PANEL 2
OLD BEN: WOTTA REVOLTIN DEVELOPMENT *THIS* IS...
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John Byrne
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GEEZ! Already had to delete somebody who can't
COUNT!!!!
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Steve Horton
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I hope Dave and Steven can get online today to post theirs.
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Shaun Crowell
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Stephen Hippleheuser
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Well let me try again. This time I will leave off the
cover and the redrawing of page 5.
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Nope. The RULES were INCREDIBLY SIMPLE and
CLEAR. If I let YOU fudge, I have to let EVERYBODY
fudge.
JB
Edited by JohnByrne2 on 01 March 2007 at 5:33pm
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Stephen Hippleheuser
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How am I fudging? The deadline is today, I am not changing anything after the deadline. I am simply eliminating the cover and a redrawing I did of the last page. I don't see the fudging. In the end, this is your board and your BBQ so you can of course do as you wish but I don't really see the bending of rules in allowing a person to adjust their number of pages.
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John Byrne
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How am I fudging?
*****
Tell us all why you deserve special treatment?
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Sam Parker
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