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While I would normally never dispute Peter's expertise on turning characters into assholes, he's wrong on this one. The FF and their supporting cast (most especially Johnny and Wyatt, when they are traveling with Lockjaw) treat Lockjaw as a dog, but the Inhumans do not refer to him as a dog, and always speak to him as they speak to each other. Further, Lockjaw responds in ways that suggest he is something other than a dog. When I did my research, looking for anything that might contradict my story, I found in the Stan and Jack years only one instance in which Crystal greets Lockjaw as "Puppy Boy". The rest of the time she and the other Inhumans speak conversationally both to and about him.

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That needs a bit of fine tuning. Lockjaw should not be refered to as a "former" inhuman, any more than should Triton, or Gorgon,or that Centaur guy, each of whom were transformed by the Terragin mists into something very different from human. In fact, the whole point is that the Inhumans are not "human", in much the same way that we are not Cromagnon. The Royal Family seem to hold their position largely because their transformations are less physically dramatic than other Inhumans.

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you should find a better way of retconning that development than a "practical joke."

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