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Dave Kopperman
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Smells like post-adolescent spirit...
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Morgan Welborn
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Thanks for understanding my situation. I look forward to viewing the final comic.
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James Stewart
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ok George i'll edit you in. feel free to colour more if you like.Welcome aboard
Dave yes you are down for penciling page twenty, i'll put you down for colouring the page also.
Matt P the page is great and would have loved to ink it,. but since i;m taking on the lettering, and other duties beckining me. i had to give it up.
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James Stewart
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Dave said- If 'yes,' can you send me the final script for that page? Thanks.
Dave the script for page 20 doesn't exsist yet only a plot ,which JB done, it can be located in the first page of this thread. Good luck with it.
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George Peter Gatsis
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Can I get a good pencil file of page 22 so I can work ahead until the inks are ready?
My email is available...
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Dave Kopperman
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Right. Got it. Should have it in a couple of days - this being the weekend
& all...
Shame you didn't have the time, Morgan - that first panel was excellent.
And I have to find a way to draw it over WITHOUT ripping you off, which
should be a challenge...
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Guest79877180
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(go ahead and rip it - just call it a tribute...)
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Dave Kopperman
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All right - pencils for page 20.
Hope this works. Whoever is inking this, let me know and I'll send you a
nice high-res file.
A couple of notes -
1) Yes, that crowd scene is from hunger. I thought about redrawing it or
celaning it up, but I thought I'd leave one panel that was more layout than
finish. If you want me to polish it, I'll be more than happy.
2) Note to the scripter: the hand in the bottom center panel is Sue's hand,
sort of in a pleading gesture as she goes under. Just wanted to make
sure you knew that it wasn't an early appearance of the grabby hands
from the next couple of pages.
3) Also for scripter/inker/whoever cares: in the synopsis, JB notes that
there's a time-slowing effect that goes unnoticed by Sue that plays out
over the next couple of pages. Taking a look a what Darren has drawn,
he's focused a lot more on the sinking and grabbing bits, so I tried to fit
in the effect here. After some experimentation, I decided that the best
way to apporoach it, without going over the top, was to simply 'bullet
time' the cop from the first panel into the last panel. Same poisiton. He's
not saying anything, or reacting to anything new - that's still the same
frozen reaction from panel one.
JB notes that he wants the time-slowing subtle enough so that Sue
doesn't notice, and even the reader won't really know what's up until it's
revealed in the proverbial last issue. I've missed the boat on this, but...
Anyway, keep me posted.
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Dave Kopperman
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Whoops. Just now saw that Darren has, in fact, got Sue standing in the first
panel of page 21. Sorry abbout that - I was working from the outline and a
thumbnail of all the pages that didn't have a complete pp. 21-22.
Anyway, I can just redraw panel four to have Sue struggling to stand again.
Give me a day or two on that.
Also, I see that the pavement has become a boardwalk. I'll texturize
accordingly in panel two.
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Dave Kopperman
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Also, Matt P.:
Are you still up for inking this page? In which case, before I go to redrafting
that one panel, is there anything you'd like clarified?
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Darren Taylor
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Pencils look great Dave!
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Guest79877180
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Wow Dave! Looking forward to your revisions as well.
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