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Great work everyone! I'm fairly new to the forum, but from these last few weeks, I'm seeing progress. Everyone is stepping up from their last illustration!!!
Mary, Good Nightcrawler work. From the panels what I've seen so far, it looks like you are crafting a story. The poses are good, so now try working at muscle development.
Marc, nice JLA splash. The only weakest part in this piece is the background. If you want a city, such as Metropolis or Gotham, then really do a city. Get an invaluable resource-- photo reference. Believe it or not, a cool cityscape with dynamic perspective and detail will let your characters look better. Look at Jim Lee's awesome cityscapes.
Chris, Supergirl- great casual pose.. For Kara’s proportions, you might want to give her a slimmer waist to accentuate her sillo. I like the color version.
Good pose of the girl in boots.
Andrew, is that Iron Man drawing an original from you? If it is, congrats, nice poses!
Greg- I like the twins drawing!
Wallace, I like the graphic design quality of your illo.
Bill, keep those great Buckaroo illos coming. I like the pulp adventure angle.
John, nice Mary Marvel!
Anthony L- great seductive shot. You put some great details like the doll, and other elements.
Marcus- Nova!!! Nice shot of him blasting off. Good pose and spotting. Decent inks. My only view, (and please take this as constructive, ok?) is to find a way to make the lines more than just perspective lines. This piece reminds me of Simonson. If you ever look at the great Walt Simonson’s speed and burst lines, this guy is fantastic at it. He has streak lines of varying weight, accompanied by initial and current flares, and he adds some uneven flare streams. That's what I would do to enhance your piece. Hope it helps.
Vladimir- excellent brush ink work. The two of you are a good combo- now somebody color this!! This is a really nice work!
New BattleWorlds post!
Night vs. Scorpion Aliens, and
Blitz- Scorpion Alien Armor turnaround (My Kirby tribute design- Long Live KING KIRBY!!!!)
Let's keep it up! Keep drawing, keep learning! And thanks to all for your generous comments. GE



Here's the larger Blitz GIF
http://www.battleworlds.com/downloads/GIF/blitz-turn.gif
Edited by George Edwards on 07 April 2006 at 5:38pm
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