Posted: 07 July 2009 at 12:33pm | IP Logged | 12
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I may be being a bit on the picky side here, but the storytelling in the Gotham Sirens page is really flawed.
1. Catwoman is attacking Bonecrusher from behind, but then switches going left to right. Which does makes sense because if she continued going in that direction then she would have taken out the others aswell. So not really well planned out.
2. Who is CW telling to 'Get out of here!'? It should be shown that it's the couple.
3. The couple would have to run past BC in order to carry on down the alley.
4. BC's left arm is extended in his attack on CW but then his right is extended when she punches him. Also his back is facing her in the previous panel so it would make more sense for her to kick him in the back, as that is the best position that she's been set up for in the previous panel anyway. Or if she had to punch him then it should be with the right hand as this would have more momentum.
Just my two pence worth.
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