Nope, no "evolution". I'm pleased for Wayne that he has found a publisher (tho I hope this does not turn into a bucket of cold water in terms of his own enthusiasm for the project, and future such projects, when the realities of publishing and the marketplace crash down on him), but for me, a job is a job is a job. About the only thing I can say I did differently here -- something you can see in that first panel -- is that I did not thin out the details when I knew balloons would have to go. Wayne is buying the art as art, as well as something he wants to publish, so I am doing what I can to give him full pages, without giving him pages that will be too "busy" when printed.