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Sam Parker
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Can't wait to comment on some o'these...
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Let's see the Hippleheuser stuff -- if there's some disqualification from "winning," so be it.  But no doubt he worked hard and we would like to see it.

 

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It's okay, I learned alot just from making them.  I'll put them up on my thread at comicbloc and consider it a lesson learned.

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Here's the script, as typed by my brother:

Fantastic Four v. Fantastic Four
Script Page 1
Panel A
DOOM: What…!?
HUMAN TORCH: I swear Doom, every time we meet you get a little dumber!INVISIBLE WOMAN: Enough, Johnny.
Panel B
DOOM: Enough indeed! Every time we meet, I grow more weary of you!
Panel C
THING: Well, that’s a shame, ‘cause I never grow tired of you!
Panel D
REED (OP): It is unlike you, Victor, to conceive a plan so carelessly. 
Panel E
DOOM: Curious, Richards? You’ve fallen for an old trick!

Script Page 2
Panel A
DOOM: You walked into the spider’s lair.
Panel B
DOOM: HAHAHAHAHA! Finally, the perfect plan for revenge! Perhaps you are right Fantastic Four – this plan is too much for Doom to conceive.
Panel C
Panel D
Panel E
SKRULL: It is a plan only a Skrull could conceive!

Script Page 3
Panel A
Panel B 
BEN: So, Stretch, what the heck jus’ happened?
SUE: Where are we, Reed?
REED: I’m not entirely certain. 
Panel C
REED: Although Dr. Doom is capable of many things, sending us through a space continuum seems entirely unlike him. 
JOHNNY: REED! 
Panel D
JOHNNY: It’s our old spaceship! 
BEN: Cripes! It’s worse ‘en that!
SUE: It can’t be…it’s us!

Script Page 4
Panel A
BEN: I’ve always wanted a chance ta’ clobber ya’, Stretch! Now, be good an’ hold still!
REED (Caption – OP): No, Benjamin!
Panel B
REED (Caption): Doom may have bended time as well as space! If this is truly our former selves, then defeating them could change our existence.
SUE: But, Reed, how do we fight ourselves?
Panel C 
JOHNNY: How do we know this is really the old us and not…
OLD BEN: It’s clobberin’ time!!
JOHNNY: Never mind.
Panel D
REED: If I am correct, we need incapacitate them in some way! Somehow hinder their ability to fight, control their powers…ugh!

Script Page 5 (Byrne’s Page)
Panel A
BEN: Are you suggestin’, this situation ain’t completely in our control?

From my plot summary:

Plot Summary:

 

Pg 1:  The FF bust in on Dr Doom.  First the Human Torch and Invisible Woman thru a hole Johnny melts in the ceiling, then when Doom turns, Mr Fantastic and the Thing from the other side.  The Thing punches Doom.  Doom pulls out a device and says something threatening.

 

Pg2: Energy beams hitt he FF, and they disappear.  Doom cackles and transforms into…the Super Skrull, who says something about revenge…perfect plan…etc.

 

Pg3: The FF appear in a crackle of energy. The stop to discuss the situation, Reed commenting how this doesn’t seem like Doom (or somesuch), when Johnny sees something:  The FF’s rocket from the day they got their powers, and themselves charging menacingly!

 

Pg 4: Battle ensues, as the FF try to figure things out a little carefully trying not to hurt their other-selves

 

Pg 5: the Byrne double-splash!

 

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