Posted: 30 November 2007 at 7:48am | IP Logged | 6
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You should've posted the page where Jeanne-Marie is handed over the crummy bed room. It's one of the best pages by far (story wise). I'm quoting from memory cause I don't have the issue at hand right now.
-"He died in that very bed. Of course, the lock will be removed from the door."
-"All my hard work finally paid off!"
Be careful, Jeanne-Marie, don't get too greedy! It's a sin! And then Aurora takes over. A Stranger in my Mirror's simply my favorite back up.
I also liked when she punches a guy but it's so fast that the punch wasn't even drawn. It's probably been done before but it's the first time I've seen it.
The writing is definitely A+
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